|Reviews for The Silence At The End Of A Cigarette|
| Plinky 10/31/05 . chapter 1
"Memories flashing like a slide-show on speed" lovely description.
"blood on the carpet, in the tub, on my arm, down cascades of loneliness and longing." very well emphasised.
"Memories." so simple and yet so good.
"The pale orange dances at the end of my fingertips" lovely description.
Lovely ending. Really good. I like the way you sort of have it all building up to the question and then the cigarette goes out, leaving you in the dark. fantastic poem. Keep writing!
| WiltingBlackRose 10/10/05 . chapter 1
HOLY FRIGGIN' WOW! I love the whole idea of this poem and everything. My friend said I was the next Edgar Allan Poe. I think you'd be even better at it. You're better with symbolic stuff and images.
| HauntedMisery 10/9/05 . chapter 1
Ok... creepy but good, great job
| undepressed-one44 10/9/05 . chapter 1
"Memories, flashing like a slide-show on speed" for some reason I love that line..I mean, I love the rest of it as well, but that line sounds cool..heh..amazing work as usual
-freak from the corner
| Rozlin 10/9/05 . chapter 1
wow! i love the last line!