whoa, mad crazy awesome poem here, muchly love the traces of mountain dew and the third poison of the day comment...though i have no clue what a oolagah is, pretty sweet word though, anywayz, muchly excellent

I liked it a lot, but I didn't completely understand the last three lines. Good work, though.

wow...just...wow...lovelylovely.

I just ran out of comments to make anymore. So I'll say, here's a very good poem.

this is beautiful stuff, the rythm the shape and flow of the piece, amazing...