Dazzling? Yes. These words leave me breathless.

beautiful imagery in this poem. i adore the way u keep writing someone said this etc. the last verse is also really beautiful. theres loads of description in this, tho it seems to be about everything and anything. its a little vague, maybe u should try to talk about something specific. great job tho:-)

This poem has a really interesting format. There isn't quite as much imagery in this one and, oddly enough, I think it's a little easier to understand than many of yours. Not quite as abstract, perhaps. Hmm...

Yea! You posted it! *happy dance*

This is so pretty! This is probably your best poem in terms of imagery, although all of your poems are amazing in that sense. In the second line of the first stanza I'm not sure the word 'of' should be there. It doesn't really sound like it fits. Otherwise, great job! Oh, and thanks for what you had to say about 'Monday Morning'!

Blessed be!