Oh my gosh! You're back! Have you updated your story since the Court scene? Please do email me more chapters!

Yo, it's bloodtide. Just to say I emailed you my email address and I'd tell you on here incase it doesn't get through to you for some obscure and annoying reason.

So yeh, feel free to delete this review after you've read it so it doesn't stain your stories review board.

Loved it.Being lazy, I'm not going to email you. I'm just going to squint at the screen for a while and hope that another chapter magically appears.

Update. Soon. Please. x33

Harr.

T'alnoth of the Gold Flight:

*Idly twitches tail*

Well, considering that you were kind enough to read something from my author...I'll just use this opportunity to do a small reply before we move onto the review proper.

1. My Creator is light on description, only putting it in when A) It is necessary to advance the plot. B)It is pleasing to the reader and enjyable to read. C) The person in the PoV will notice such description given the situation. My Creator recognizes he is not Tolkien and has stepped away from mounds of bad descriptive prose in favour of plot.

Considering that you've only read chapter 3 and this is my Creator's first and admittedly bad work, I think you might want to see more before deciding. If you don't like the writing style, that's fine.

Well. You're probably going to be doing either a real-world based or crossover fantasy, aren't you? I've got not much to say, for now-being the kind who looks out for stock characters, idiot plots and impossibilities and improbablilties, I can't say much about your descriptive prose. While you do try to pander to more than sight, it takes a lot to pull off descriptive writing and not have your readers simply skip over it.

At least you don't do horribly long infodumps.

This is a fascinating story! Write more soon, because I can't wait to read more soon! Keep up the good work?

Did you have a couple more chapters on this story or is my sanity in question here? Hm.

Sah, can I please have some more?

I'm not even going to attempt to really review this because I'll just make a fool out of myself if you ever decided to read my writing and thought, "Hey, she's not that good, who the heck does she think she is giving me that kind of review? She should take her own advice!".

So I'll just say I think you did a really great job. I loved, "Bricks of mystery. God, I wish I had an eraser."

Also, "Seriously. What moron paints his house teal?" made me laugh. There's this house that we drive by every day, and it's painted the most obnoxious shade of blue. I swear, it makes my eyes hurt just looking at it!

E-mailing you righ away! I must read the rest of this!

...What? I'm too LAZY to email anyone...

I really enjoyed this--you use words quite well. Words are my favorite thing, and you know what to do with them.

My favorite lines are:'I could have been a butcher. A baker. A -- well, okay, candlesticks aren't exactly in demand these days. I could've been an investment banker. "A butcher, a baker, an investment banker" -- kinda got a ring to it, doesn't it?'

Very nice. It's well written, witty, and intriguing. On that note, please e-mail me the rest!

lohan794@netscape.net

- L.L.

Great story! ^_^

Could I skip on sending the e-mail part? I wanna read it, but I am lazy... ^_^