Well, character likeness belonging to someone else aside, I find myself very impressed by this short piece of fiction that you have set upon us. Your use of wording and pacing really shines brightly in this! Why you would declare that this is your last attempt at a vampire fic is beyond me! I think you did a hell of a job with this short story! Everything written was crisp, direct and well-thought out. I rarely came across any kind of grammar or spelling errors in this, and that alone should be a testiment to you on how good a job you did with this! If you must, let this be your last vampire fic. But as a friend, I beg you not to! The job you did here was excellent and I would love to see more added to this! Well, that's my two cents! Keep up the good work!

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Terryll Preston, still2twisted of FictionPress fame...