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Reviews For: The Strange White Flower

Naruto's Territory
2005-11-03
ch 1,
abusevery cute
LoveAlways05
2005-10-17
ch 1,
abuseHAHAHAHA this is great! it was really funny! i will never see the toilet the smae way again...i will picture it as a white flower...hehe jk... anywho good job on this one...
Dr-Pepper-2008
2005-10-11
ch 1,
abuseHahahahahahahh lololololool that was so funny! I didnt know what it was at frist! Then i cought on!! That is soo funny! Keep writting!!
silentscreamer07
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abuseThat happened just last week did it not? lol ::innocent smile::

I LOVED THIS STORY! it was hilarious...i fig. out almost halfway thro that it was a toliet, i was so proud of meself! i dont usually fig. out stuff really fast, but u know that. :P haha ne wats.. stay away from toliets Callie, thats why ur parents still have you wearing those diapers, rem? :P *kw* cya lata odd one.

~george~
Moon Drops
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abuseThat's funny! I like how you described everything from your point of view, because until the end, I was unsure what the white door led to! Wonderful job!
my failure
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abusegood job.:)
DeadTeddyBears
2005-10-09
ch 1,
abuseHope that everyone liked this one!Took me a while to write though. Oh and sorry about the poetry format guys.(I didn't really plan on it being a story.)

Funny though, I thought of this story when I was brushing my teeth, and I saw the toilet in the mirror. Then...BOOM...inspiration!

Please review. :P
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