Wow, I really enjoyed that poem. My favorite lines were "Just to die, or to lose some more?/ Holding onto memories, fast as you can" Great job with this.

Brilliant and well-written to an extreme. You have a real talent for showing emotion and the poem really gets under your skin and makes you think. Well done!

but things are getting better now, right? :) it's all a big lesson to teach us what it means and feels to have lived.

Oh God, this is exactly how I've been feeling Dia. How did you know? How were you able to put all of my thoughts and feelings into this simple poem? It's like you read my mind. If I hadn't come across this I don't think I'd ever known that someone knew exactly how I felt like that. All I can say is that it blew me away. Very nice.

Oh god. Not another one. This may possibly be one of your best yet. Well done. I can empathize on this front though. Well done. xxP.Rxx

True....very true...