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Reviews For: Starry, Starry Night - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

Arichos
2005-12-08
ch 1,
abuseYour words paint a brilliant picture. Very vivid, very compelling.
Boom Kitty
2005-11-05
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. You imagery in this was stunning, it felt so real, and at the same time so surreal. I haven't read anything that made me feel that. Which is a good thing :P
rrmehta364
2005-11-03
ch 1,
abusesorry, but what exactly did the line "Heart tapping out a foreign, stumbling tattoo" mean. other than that, i really like the tone of this poem. kind of mystical like, very good.
HauntedMisery
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is great, awesome work!
Nothing Profound
2005-10-23
ch 1,
abuseSo going on my favorites list. That is all I have to say.
Squishy Lucius
2005-10-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is truely a great piece of writing here...the mood was so mystial and enchanting. Every line has a meaning and your description! man, your description was amazing! It has a mysterious aspect to it and even then i can see the sadder tone..the lonliness. "Heart tapping out a foreign, stumbling tattoo

That threatened to stifle, to overwhelm"Awesome personification here, it really makes the whole poem come alive and so much clearer to visualise as a reader. Really really enjoy reading your poems...Keep up the wonderful work! _Me
Alankria
2005-10-18
ch 1,
abuseVery very good. I loved the descriptions, and though I didn't quite get was going on, the mystery makes it darker.
Astarayl
2005-10-16
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful imagery.. it's bittersweet, but not in a typical way.. you've conveyed an inexplicable mood here-

"Her world wheeled, Twirling softly, Spinning on its broken axis"

Just amazing. Good work on this piece.
Elizabeth Ebony
2005-10-15
ch 1,
abuseTotally beautifully amazing.I adored it-lost for words.Imagery is lovely.

E.Ebony
mizu no kokoro
2005-10-13
ch 1,
abusewow~ pretty~ stars are so magical~~ lovely work

keep writing!
NOLONGERSERVICING
2005-10-12
ch 1,
abuseamazing imagery...i love it!
forgottenmoon831
2005-10-12
ch 1,
abuseWoW, that was beautiful! Such a great feeling is displayed here! Oh, and thanks for the review!
lovelyhead
2005-10-12
ch 1,
abuseI think this is your best work, honestly the descriptions are something amazing. You have an original style, and you manipulate the words very well. I normally don't like poetry at all, I find it too short and brief for my liking, but this poem was an exception. I think that your poetry will take you places!

P.S. Thanks for all the great reviews for Swish!
Emmytastic gal
2005-10-11
ch 1,
abuseWOW. thats incredible. I LOVE this poem. The change in emotions makes it so interesting. Your use of words are so very eloquent and beautiful. Keep up the fabulous work.

write on,-Em
Pure Autumn
2005-10-11
ch 1,
abuseawesome poem - deep very deep :)
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