I love it. It reflect the reals thoughts of an individual and leaves a lasting impression.

I love the 'lasting' feel you give to the word itself by dragging it over two lines. Nicely done.

Beautiful. So amazing. Keep writing. I love your work!

Hey

I think this is interesting. The first few lines are quite captivating. But I think it strays into something else after that. It doesn't feel connected. Maybe it's not supposed to, but I think that you distance yourself from the car subject for too long. Regardless, these are powerful images.

George

have felt this. really, the poem is just so sincere. I love the ending, how emotionally strong and gripping your words are. it is just so beautiful.

* noelle

I love the lines "I can hear his laughter like lullabies" Your imaginative description just blows me away

"forties style lovelast...ingforeveror however longit stayed dark outside."

Because no one else is there and no one can see you. Things feel so much more different at night.