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| natasha 2006-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abusevery- very cool...again- i loved this one too. you're really good at this! i really liked the ending. |
| FunkyFlower17 2005-12-09 ch 1,  | abusea good poem. love the question at the end. great job, ~mez~ |
| Lost Sygnal 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, this poem is so beautiful. "Entangled in believing" is a great line. Very deep =D Keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your work. ~Steve |
| les petits bateaux 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem. I love the string of words that fitted perfectly in this poem and I love the way you used a question to phrase the whole ending. It also makes you think again, for a second, what the whole thing actually meant. Very good job. ~~Trinity |
| kawaii -kitty-kitty 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abuseit was really good:), thanks for everything, you're so awesome |
| Ang-Dev 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is such an awesome poem! i mean, the rhyming and the flow is really good and altogether u hav a brilliant beginning. btw, welcome to fp and thanx so much for the review! keep writing:-)~ang~ |
| Thorn's-girl 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abuse"If I loose my heart in freedom Then who needs wings to fly?" Excellent line. This had great rythm and flows beautifully. "Entangled in believing." Georgeous. |
| q is for quirks 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abusethat was good! yeah, cool cheese. |
| bound_to_break 2005-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeloo there Gummibear:) what a rhyme of stupidity I now know who this is thanks to whits review.But what can I say about this poem it is an awer if that is a word or I just made it up.But I liked this poem KW expect to see more from you guys... when we get our computer hooked up I will have some new stuff(better too) but I miss you guys 'Hang in there sgetti I know your pain:P'But anyways Loved the poem and hope to see more soon Bye Tiffany |
| Not So Glamorous 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuse(:likes:) |
| gummibared 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseha, ha, I'm reviewing myself...Ha, ha, haha, hahaha...oops! my brain fell out *_* |
| silentscreamer07 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseYAY!! YOU FINALLY HAVE A POEM AND A FP NAME! WOO HOO!! hehe..im so excited..can ya tell? Ne whats...on with thee review.. THIS WAS AWESOME! I loved it, no joke. I absolutely love it when things are compared to wings..i really do..i love it..so that last line was my fav...that last stanza was... "I i loose my heart in freedom/ Then who needs wings to fly?" GAH! it was lovely..quitlovely.. ::claps politely:: ...forget that...::stands up and screams "yeah!":: im an odd child, i know. ne wats, awesome poem..*kw* and thnx so much for the reviews! ~George~ |
| LoveAlways05 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseHey Hayley! i really thought this poem was cute! keep up the good work. Sorry that Alice is following you,my deepest sorrow for you |
| E.S. Lundgren 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abusegreat last line, it really brought out the meaning of the poem. |
| forgottenmoon831 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was beautiful! It flowed so well and i love your theme here; thanks for the great read!! |