That's a nice way to put it! I really liked that one! You're a good describer...if that's a word! lol

awesome! I liked a lot... and wow...awesome last line.

I've thought about this before and didn't really know how to write it down properly. And now I've read something that satisfies that need. The words you used conveyed very strong images and made your writing seem longer than it was. (Which is a good thing.) The last sentence tied it all together and brought the point to light. I also agree with some your other reviews, this made me think...

BINGO! well, let me say right now, that i really really loved this. I guess that its because of my background in physics, and the theory of how the whole universe would collapse back on itself and begin all over again. and how we won't know that the universe is collapsing and what not. anyway, i loved this. i loved that it was short. its perfect.

Very interesting. I liked the ending (or should I say the beginning). It really makes you think.

Simple, yet elegant. Cool plot, you don't see that much. Awesome last line. Al in all I liked it.

~Sapphire Unicorn~

confusing... but quite good.like it!yoursJust Another Suicide