  Jade 2005-11-06 . chapter 4 Oh, wow, I just read to Chapter 4. This is a really great story, and I hope you update it more. Poor guy. |
  GaelynX 2005-11-01 . chapter 4That's intense. Did this really happen? Like, to a real person? That's terrible if it did. Even I feel bad for the guy. |
 Ashes.to.Acid 2005-10-31 . chapter 4What.. that's sad.. |
| Ashes.to.Acid 2005-10-30 . chapter 3 This still sounds strangely familiar.. |
| GaelynX 2005-10-16 . chapter 2 So...I'm guessing that the baby lived? This is interesting...You've captured my attention yet again. |
| Ashes.to.Acid 2005-10-11 . chapter 1 You've caught my attention...please update! |
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