very pretty, almost seperating from realiety into fantasy, whimsical, i love it to peices. - keep it up :)

Oh, that was beautiful, Sil! Really! I always love how you write, especially when its like this, the imagery was gorgeous and I adored how ... sweet, it was! Lovely stuff.

Oh gosh- fluff!That was beutiful, it was lovely *smiles absently*I love the way you use the glitter and feathers, together with your style of writing trhe whole thing seems dreamlike, and utterly beautiful.You've made a little fangirl very happy- thank you!*huggles*

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I love it!! *dies*

i like it

Oh, wow...absolutely lovely. Breathtaking.

Oh my gosh...you didn't even focus on their lust, you focused on their feelings and their surroundings, not something easily accomplished. I loved it!

I love the imagery you create here.