How do you do that? You can make the most beautiful images with so few words. Amazing imagery.

Wow. Short, but so true. Beautiful. I loved it.

interesting idea, wonderful execution. Perfect.

nice

A very unique view in this a simple phrase at first glance but really there's a much deeper meaning to it. The formatting isn't bad, in my opinion it would be more appealing if the last two lines were in different postions then the top one. So that it would emphasize the meaning even more in the poem. You made this poem to where it can be interpreted in many ways to whoever is reading it. I like this alot, one of those short but much so impacting poems.

Oohh- interesting idea. I love it.