"The poem never stops" but hey, it did stops! In a way... - worry not, I do understand what you mean. I think. Nice and random - I like it. Yuudachi's in progress (new story!), and I have another (random!) poem on its way - in spanish. Will post the english tho ^^ ~Pyra

Heehee...Cool! I enjoyed it muchly. Keep up the great work.

Haha I like it! Except...the poem did stop :( heehee :) xRachx

haha! nice poem. i like the way you turn things inside out, in a way.

I loved the whole poem... up until the last line. Before it just talked about... everything. And then you actually awknowledged the poem itself... maybe try something along the lines of 'the cycle never stops'.

But other than that, I thought it was really good. ^^-

Hah... This made me smile. There IS happiness in the world! Aw...

The flow is a bit weird, but it's still good. I liked it. Fun idea, fun incorporation, etc. etc.