Just a quick lil thing about structure:

I need your arms to hold meAs I lie here all aloneI need your hand to guide meAs I die here so far from home

Is what you currently have, however if you remove the so on the last line:

I need your arms to hold meAs I lie here all aloneI need your hand to guide meAs I die here far from home

It fits better with the structure. Read it aloud, you'll get what I mean.

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