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Reviews For: The Thief's Guide to Everything

felicia13
2007-08-02
ch 1,
abuseGreat hook, Fen-Shay. I want to read more. It's all like, "ACTION! ADVENTURE! GIRLS STEALING THINGS!" and you're like, "Whoa. What even is this?" It's true.

Perhaps could use a little more intro before the theiving, but... that'd probably ruin it. All I can say is that I'd like there to be more. Great cliffhanger, though. If that doesn't get the reader's attention, I'm not sure what will.

Felicia.
Jeanie Gordon
2007-08-01
ch 7,
abuseThat's all?! I wanted it to keep going! It does have more chapters on the way... right?

I loved it. And you must know I'm very picky about stories. You had me interested the whole way through. I love your writing style and your amazing ability to make some of the least Mary Jane-esque characters I've ever read. Lovely. :)

And I must say, the chapter lengths were perfect. On a website like this, you don't want to have to read 10 hour long chapters that turn out to be a waste of your life in the end (which yours were't). You're brilliant and if you don't get a few more chapters up soon I'll have to break something fragil.

-Jeanie
Chidaruma Kamisori
2007-06-24
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was a great first chapter!

Thank you for the reveiw. It made me smile.

=D

CK
Insanity Lord
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuse"The Thief's Guide to Everything"? It sounds interesting. I think I'll read the rest of it. I like it so far (yes, I've only just now caught onto the 'review-for-a-review' system on this site. I'm sorry, I wasn't trying to be rude or anything...I just didn't realize it until recently).

- Insanity Lord.
Magnolian Wolf
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseHallo!! XP (I'm a cheater, I'm your sister)
Anonymous
2006-08-18
ch 4, anon.
abuseWow, that was a realy good chapter!! XD(That man Avery is wicked evil man. . .)
Anonymous
2006-08-18
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou rock and you know it!! You rock and you know it!!*does a little dance*. . .Okay, I'm done.
my dangerous angel baby
2005-11-20
ch 2,
abuseTalon? Lol. I love her back talk. Update soon!~
Morcirith
2005-10-14
ch 1,
abusewhat? talk about cliffhanger... i'd like to know a little more about this, if there's anything left of it.
maxnotevoltage
2005-10-13
ch 1,
abuseWow - this is intense. I laughed at that one part... "It would be a long time before they settled down and noticed the robbery. “Thief! THIEF!” Never mind that." Hahaha... That was awesome. Keep it coming! You're great! -- J.max
Celebros
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abusecool.
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