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| felicia13 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat hook, Fen-Shay. I want to read more. It's all like, "ACTION! ADVENTURE! GIRLS STEALING THINGS!" and you're like, "Whoa. What even is this?" It's true. Perhaps could use a little more intro before the theiving, but... that'd probably ruin it. All I can say is that I'd like there to be more. Great cliffhanger, though. If that doesn't get the reader's attention, I'm not sure what will. Felicia. |
| Jeanie Gordon 2007-08-01 ch 7, | abuseThat's all?! I wanted it to keep going! It does have more chapters on the way... right? I loved it. And you must know I'm very picky about stories. You had me interested the whole way through. I love your writing style and your amazing ability to make some of the least Mary Jane-esque characters I've ever read. Lovely. :) And I must say, the chapter lengths were perfect. On a website like this, you don't want to have to read 10 hour long chapters that turn out to be a waste of your life in the end (which yours were't). You're brilliant and if you don't get a few more chapters up soon I'll have to break something fragil. -Jeanie |
| Chidaruma Kamisori 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was a great first chapter! Thank you for the reveiw. It made me smile. =D CK |
| Insanity Lord 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuse"The Thief's Guide to Everything"? It sounds interesting. I think I'll read the rest of it. I like it so far (yes, I've only just now caught onto the 'review-for-a-review' system on this site. I'm sorry, I wasn't trying to be rude or anything...I just didn't realize it until recently). - Insanity Lord. |
| Magnolian Wolf 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseHallo!! XP (I'm a cheater, I'm your sister) |
| Anonymous 2006-08-18 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow, that was a realy good chapter!! XD(That man Avery is wicked evil man. . .) |
| Anonymous 2006-08-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou rock and you know it!! You rock and you know it!!*does a little dance*. . .Okay, I'm done. |
| my dangerous angel baby 2005-11-20 ch 2, | abuseTalon? Lol. I love her back talk. Update soon!~ |
| Morcirith 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abusewhat? talk about cliffhanger... i'd like to know a little more about this, if there's anything left of it. |
| maxnotevoltage 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuseWow - this is intense. I laughed at that one part... "It would be a long time before they settled down and noticed the robbery. “Thief! THIEF!” Never mind that." Hahaha... That was awesome. Keep it coming! You're great! -- J.max |
| Celebros 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abusecool. |