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Reviews For: Paradise

SerialXLain
2005-10-14
ch 1,
abuseI found it happy because you're talking about giving up pain and tears and blood and going where you're flying...

I really love your lines "Let the moon be a guide/to my own paradise" And "THe darkness nothing more than melody/This is my own symphony"

I'm glad you got an FP account! Can't wait to read more!

-Katy-
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