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| SerialXLain 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI found it happy because you're talking about giving up pain and tears and blood and going where you're flying... I really love your lines "Let the moon be a guide/to my own paradise" And "THe darkness nothing more than melody/This is my own symphony" I'm glad you got an FP account! Can't wait to read more! -Katy- |