|Reviews for Thirteen|
| fairEtales 8/17/06 . chapter 1
I really liked this. I like the creativity. 1 & 2 & 3. So cute. Really nice job!
| Lucid TaZ 5/22/06 . chapter 1
Nice, I like it. I'm 19 but I've got 'associations' with age 13. I think that age is nothing. At least it's overrated. Someone of 13 years old can be as wise and influencing as an adult. In some cases at least.
I recognize things in your poem and like them. It has a certain strife in it and I like that.
| Amalia Jagd 5/17/06 . chapter 1
weird... kinda how i was when about 13/14...trying to be smart and powerful. i still believe i succeeded for a while in my innocence.
| Charity F 4/15/06 . chapter 1
I love this one for the message it preaches... i felt the same! The ideas, feeling and emotion expressed is so raw and true, it sung a damn right chord in my heart... Keep it up girl!
| Dale Christopher 4/1/06 . chapter 1
Even though this is obviously from the point of view of a girl, this poem helped me remember my old Thirteen-year-old days. (I'm a very old twenty-year-old). The words here hold a wisdom uncommon in a thirteen year old girl, but not unheard of, it actually reminded me of a girl I knew who hated her age because she was far too smart for it. Anyway, rambling aside, another great poem. Although, I agree with you on the format, could have been better.
| AchtungBabyAchtung 11/26/05 . chapter 1
yuh...kind of odd format..but i liked it. 13 is the WORST age. fifteen rocks who! anyhoo, i liked it. a lot. iz x
| Tangerine Tickle again p 11/25/05 . chapter 1
Wow. I'm real smart. I just realized the misspelled "too" was on PURPOSE. Yeah... Sorry about that. I'm a little slow. :p Anyway, this poem is going on my Favorites list, I love it so much! :D As I said last time, keep it up. ;)
| Tangerine Tickle 11/25/05 . chapter 1
Ooh, that was /awesome/! Very, very good! Nice use of bold to give certain words more power. The only problem I saw was when you used "two" instead of "too." Other than that, I loved this! Keep it up! _
PS: Thanks for reviewing The Day My Pancakes Came To Life. I'm playing around with the idea of making a sequeal. ;)
| always gats b y 11/24/05 . chapter 1
13 IS a very complicated age, but enjoy it while you can. :) It gets chaotic from then on. Nicely written!
xo - Rei
| sialgunavez 11/5/05 . chapter 1
hey! thanks for your review a month ago. I haven't been on this site much since that last poem. MAJOR poetry block. anyway, gosh you make me remember what it was like to be 13. so innocent, so nice yet so complicated. tough year although i think it was one of the best school years for me. well, it's great to have a poem come out again so I know how you feel. I love the imagery and the concept..good job!
| Arutha 10/30/05 . chapter 1
Okay, first off, phenominal imagery in the last half there *cha-ching* And I presume that you used "two" instead of "too" on purpose, as it's the number between one and three, which I think is stupendously clever ;D It's like you took that Britney Spears song "Not a Girl" or whatever it's called and made it into something more than worth reading... which, before this, I would have thought to be impossible, lol. Great poem; keep it up ;P
| Thyrt 10/28/05 . chapter 1
yeah..thirteen is kind of awkward sometimes. and it's pretty confusing job. you explained it pretty well
| simpleplan13 10/19/05 . chapter 1
interesting.. i liek the bolded and the contrasting things... I could help you get rid of the double spacing if you want
| swift sky silver 10/15/05 . chapter 1
very creative... enjoy your teen years though. they seem a lot more fun when you look back. keep up the great work 0)
| bjw 10/13/05 . chapter 1
You're 13? Treasure the time you have! I'm 15 and I feel kind of old...lol. Anyway, I like the confident air you portray in this poem, it gives the lines a very lighthearted feel, and yet it's contemplative enough to put the message across.
"Thirteen is exactly right. a 1 and a 3…"
Really true. You GO girl!