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| Like Vines 2007-12-27 ch 3,  | abuseIt's so good! I really hope you update soon. :3 |
| Rose of Eden 2007-08-11 ch 3, | abusehey! u really are a great writter please update soon |
| Mona 2007-07-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseAwesome! Loved it! So wait Eclipsed Mind, your doing the this story now?? |
| Mona 2007-07-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseAw don't stop writing! Your the best writer i've seen so far on this site! Your stories make me all giddy and hyper and this one (even tho its remade) IS AWESOME! Please don't stop writing :( I think I'll die if you do :P But seriously plese don't! |
| nimmmm 2007-07-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseHey! I think the story is coming along great! The only thing is that Garrett seems to use "**" excessively. I understand that it's his nature however how about more variety. :D That sounds weird. Anyways, can't wait for the rest! |
| Cooties 2007-07-07 ch 3, | abuseAdorable. I love Garret, but Chris can die, I wouldn't mind. Please, please, please continue! |
| midnightbeauty 2007-06-30 ch 3, | abuseEllo! I FINALLY found this story again! Thank you bunches for continuing it, I think you're doing great so far :) You're livin' up to Mack's awesome writing :D Anyways, can't wait for your next update. :) :) I'm putting this story on my alert list!! Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| RunBabyRun 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseLike the story, but Online something (short memory), offline enemy more, rosemarie looks a lot like me, in a weird way, thats kindda what I look like in the mirror but im not photogenic at all so the pictures are all shittish. Jordan looks...gay...and weird and abnormally tan, and his hair clashes with his strange oranger-than-orange tan. yes, someone should shoot him (like me), he seems like a normal character tho.. back to the stories.. update. they're good. |
| Snowhite 2007-02-10 ch 3, | abuseOh my jesus. Are you going to keep this story up? Cause its amazing. But its been, you know, a year. I don't know. I like this story a LOT. |
| chuu x3 2006-10-27 ch 3, | abuseWell, this lurker is reviewing. LONG CHAPTER I DEMANDS. |
| icequeen401 2006-06-19 ch 3, | abusei like |
| Marie 2006-04-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseHey, I just noticed we have same name. Anyway, back to the story. A very good beginning. I really hope you'll continue. |
| sm babee 2006-03-15 ch 3, | abuseoh...Garrett, badass, sexy and sweet as hell. I think I fell in love keep it up =) |
| FamousOneLiners 2006-02-23 ch 3, anon. | abusesuch a fun story |
| Crymson Tears 2006-02-17 ch 3, | abusegood story. uh...its late, so I have nothing better to say |