aw... so sweet^^ great job!

keep writing!

this actually made me cry... I can completely relate.. awesome poem

Is every one syllabus or two? Because this format is 8,7,6,6,5. Or 6,5,6,6,5 if every is one syllabus. Anyway i thought a tanka was 5,7,5,5,7 or 7,5,7,7,5?

Huh. Who played it over the phone? Is it who I think it is?

That's so sweet! That's about all I can say. It really is. Sweet.

Short, but effective. Very good! Keep writing! ^_^

~Anna~