Great story, keep up the good work.

Aw, adorable! At first I thought this would be some cliche thing, but it really isn't. I like it. And I'd love to read about Ali and Jay. Nicely done.

Wonderful story ;O;

I just finished reading and I must say that was completely adorable. I loved every bit of it- great job =]

At places this story went to slow, and I spotted several mistakes here and there where you called placed someone else's name instead of the one that should be there...and it's not "effect" ('Jared knew just how to effect Seb'), it'll be affect.

But, over all..I liked the story - the characters have been brought forth rather well, though you should have made it a little more clear that Sophia used to act like that only because of Lucas and when they broke up she was acting more like her real self. At places she is made to sound like a whore, but she is likeable after all.

Cole and Nick - aw, they keep forgetting that anyone else exists! And Nick following Shy/Jared's advie was amazing!

I really liked Jared, but I didn't like the part where he slept with Alastair..since Alastair and Jay got married (which, by the way, was a wonderful thing to see them so happy!)...

Jon, I hated him - and the transition of their relationship was too rapid. After all, Jared had loved him, and he could not simply forget everything of a sudden...you could have mentioned that with Seb around, he felt more like himself, happier...and what caused him to get over Jon because his cheating clearly was not the deciding factor!

And, Seb..pure example of teen angst! He was probably PMS-ing when he read that article...else he would know better than to trust a gossip column!

But, over all..the story was good...feelings were brought out well, and ending was rather good...considering the fact that I consider "sappy" to be good... (I like to get up feeling good!)

And, score! Jared slept with all three Weaver brothers..ha ha!

That... was a magnificent story, and your FIRST? Wow. I really wish that my first attempt at writing and completing a story will be just as good as yours. I love the elements mixed in here, and the suspense that you built in me was so intense that I refused to step away from the screen. That's how intense the story was in terms of plotline.

Yeah, the plotline was strong. The grammar? Pretty okay, too. I see a few punctuation problems here or there, but then they were fine. The italics were disturbing, but not to the extent of disturbing my attention from the story. There was a balance of sadness, loneliness, despair, and the more positive ones, like passion and love and happiness. Beautiful drama, beautiful character development, and wonderful plot. =D

I loved the plot twists. I believe [oh, a lot of people/fans of yours are going to throw tomatoes at me...] that it was only right that Seb and JJ argued. Well, it was really just Seb, lol. Without that fight, they wouldn't have grown a stronger bond as lovers :)

I should stop the sap.

Magnificent job, congratulations for completing this story, and I look forward to reading and reviewing your other stories!

I beginning to wander if I'll be reading all your stories. This was actually really good for being your first story posted on here.

Of course reading from later stories of yours to before, I was a little confused in the beginning when there were no seperation when it skips to the next scene.

I truely love all your stories. =)

This story was really fun to read. However it could have been better since it had a lot of errors. Like sometime you would jump time in a way that made it confusing. The time shift did improve as the story moved along though. There were more errors so maybe you should consider going over it once again to fix them. Overall it was a good story though, the plot was good and the character well developed.

I really love this story. I'm glad that you have a sequel to it, even though it's not the main characters. Keep up the great work.

*goes onto reading the sequeal*

That story was actually so cute

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Omg, I love your stories so much! Hands Down and Welcome To My Life are just both so amazing...shame to see you've not got any sequels up yet! And I'm really glad you didn't end this story with the death of the main character - I think I would have cried! I'm definitely faving this story, and you're going on my Fave Authors section aswell!

I love your story!if it was a book id totally buy it!! Keep writing!you're awesome!!

I simply can not find words to discribe this story...but hell, I'll try.

It was amazing, beautiful, unique, passionate, sad, and just very very well written. I loved the plot, I loved the characters and now I'm going to go read the sequal.

You are an amazing writer! Your stories are awesome. I love this story, I'm definitely adding this story to my FAVS and you to my Fav author list as well.

Your fan ^_^,

~ok2bgay~

You have the right mix of emotions and events in this story. I really loved reading this story ♥

I like the start. I think I should have read this first, but meh whatever. I like Nick and Cole here - and I hope it all gets better for them in the sequel (okay last hint LOL)