|Reviews for Balthasar|
| the naked civil servant 1/11/06 . chapter 1
oh... i love "like a mad man laced on broken things". it's beautiful &... fragile...
| Penelope June 10/27/05 . chapter 1
almost sounds like 'Phantom of the Opera'... except, he left roses... but beautiful!
| itsonlyme07 10/26/05 . chapter 1
This was great! My favorite line by far is "He wrote love letters in place of rings" It just is a great line, I don't know why. Good Job!
| simpleplan13 10/21/05 . chapter 1
i don't get the reference, but I like it.. its well done
| backseats on thursdays 10/19/05 . chapter 1
loved the summary! awesome job!
| glehnmarc 10/16/05 . chapter 1
he wrote lover letters in the place of rings - I don't know why I liked this line so much, but I did! I like the simplicity and the shape of the poem too.
| hey maria 10/15/05 . chapter 1
Love-love-LOVE the rhymes, the simplicity of it, the beauty. Wonderful job.
| astral boy 10/14/05 . chapter 1
An excellent rhyme! The last line, "he sings", is to me the most powerful of the whole poem. It's so... triumphant. Very nice, and thank you always and again for your reviews.
| Fabian Cortez 10/14/05 . chapter 1
The emotions described by the way this poem is conveyed are perfectly considered, and hit each mark bang on target.
| Chandra-Moon 10/13/05 . chapter 1
This had such exquisite rhythm.
| hoowdoideletethisaccount 10/13/05 . chapter 1
Mm, that was lovely. Very concise, strong, raw, just pure expression and sadness and somehow-it makes me feel elated. Maybe just from the sheer strength of the writing. It's a pleasure to read something like this. It shows your gift.
| like a lover 10/13/05 . chapter 1
I love the flow of this. I love: "he wrote lover letters in the place of rings," there's something spectacular about it. there's something great about this poem (that I can't figure out) that makes me shudder.
| lifescrewsusall 10/13/05 . chapter 1
ahh this is why form can be beautiful..it is not always restrictive. i love the way the words are unified and it clicks like that... if i make sense. nice work
| naughtgreen 10/13/05 . chapter 1
But do we have to change it for the wrong reasons?
| yoolka 10/12/05 . chapter 1
i really like this one...short, but expresses everything in just a few lines. i love it. - Julia