oh... i love "like a mad man laced on broken things". it's beautiful &... fragile...

almost sounds like 'Phantom of the Opera'... except, he left roses... but beautiful!

This was great! My favorite line by far is "He wrote love letters in place of rings" It just is a great line, I don't know why. Good Job!

Megan-itsonlyme07

i don't get the reference, but I like it.. its well done

loved the summary! awesome job!

he wrote lover letters in the place of rings - I don't know why I liked this line so much, but I did! I like the simplicity and the shape of the poem too.

Love-love-LOVE the rhymes, the simplicity of it, the beauty. Wonderful job.

An excellent rhyme! The last line, "he sings", is to me the most powerful of the whole poem. It's so... triumphant. Very nice, and thank you always and again for your reviews.

The emotions described by the way this poem is conveyed are perfectly considered, and hit each mark bang on target.

Eacellent!

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

This had such exquisite rhythm.

Mm, that was lovely. Very concise, strong, raw, just pure expression and sadness and somehow-it makes me feel elated. Maybe just from the sheer strength of the writing. It's a pleasure to read something like this. It shows your gift.

I love the flow of this. I love: "he wrote lover letters in the place of rings," there's something spectacular about it. there's something great about this poem (that I can't figure out) that makes me shudder.

ahh this is why form can be beautiful..it is not always restrictive. i love the way the words are unified and it clicks like that... if i make sense. nice work

But do we have to change it for the wrong reasons?

i really like this one...short, but expresses everything in just a few lines. i love it. - Julia