i think you may just be my hero.

This is awesome.

i can't even pick out a bit i like the best.

So, um, yeah. I really liked this. It's so cute. And I love the way you wrote the whole thing, like the style, I mean. xD

In fact, I really like a lot of the stuff you wrote that I've read.

Not bad. Like the style.

very interesting. i especially loved the "andandand please". thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!

this was so cute&so real. i liked a lot. : ) it's on my favorites.

interested formatting... i like the way it changed up the piece.

its sweet imagery throughout though... and i like that "so cute like that sokeep this /awkward/ moment((um)) e)" part

very sweetly done.

.:midnight:.

well im not too sure about the cut up and butchured words, but i do like the content. it holds alot of sweet and simple emotion, love it.

Very accuratly describes teenage love. Well done.

gorgeous.

* noelle