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| violin-lady13 2006-08-29 ch 10,  | abuseWonderful job. I think I smell conflict between Matt and Conner. This is great. I really hope you continue, since I see you haven't updated since February or something. Thanks! |
| I LOVE GRAPES 2006-08-26 ch 10, | abuseWhat happened? I really like this story and hope you plan on finishing it. I guess I don't really understand some of Kelly's decisions, but I love how she and Conner interact. Amy, also, is pretty awesome. |
| nkml21 2006-07-07 ch 10, anon. | abuseWRITE MORE! LUF YO! x |
| MonkeyMohawk1 2006-06-05 ch 10, | abuseHEY why'd you stop!..update!!..i wanna know what happens!...umm ill give you a cookie if you do...-_-"...yes im desperate...so UPDATE!... |
| superheroesarereal 2006-02-26 ch 10, | abusedude this story rocks...not really much to critique b/c it's pretty much awesome =D |
| JabberzScabberz 2006-02-26 ch 10, | abuse:D:D:D GO HINHIN! :D:D:D You're on a roll GF, I'm absolutely loving it! :D Conner's mum seems adorable! :D Wish mine was like that :P Brill chapter, can't wait for morenes! :D:D:D:D Luvya! -Jabz PS: Isnt Ace from American Idol so hot? |
| JabberzScabberz 2006-02-25 ch 9, | abuseReview # 39! :D lol like I said over MSN, this chapter is blody brilliant! :D Plzplzplzplz keep on writing more Hinz...you're brill! :D |
| NiddlyPop 2006-02-21 ch 9, anon. | abuseOMG! HINNY! its frikking awesome... i love it and oh connor all the way... although matt is pretty hot too... wah its so unfair why are u ush c agood writer eh? X X X X X X X X X X X |
| jmr18007 2006-02-17 ch 8, | abuseI started reading your story on one of my school's computers (after finishing lessons), and I finished it at my home PC and really enjoyed it. You should keep going with the story and expand it. --Jade :) |
| Angel302 2006-02-17 ch 9, | abusehey great story, love to read more. Love Angel |
| elohimdancer319 2006-02-14 ch 8, | abuseIt's a very sad/ sweet story. Different from all the other stories here. It's refreshing. I'm looking forward to seeing more. |
| Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose 2006-02-13 ch 8, | abuseWonderful as always! Kelly is finally warming up a little to Conner which is nice. But you still get her character to come through, which is great! |
| Rheanna Leigh 2006-02-13 ch 8, | abuseI love how he's taking care of her like this..and how he's so concerned about her. I can't wait to see how all of this turns out. |
| JabberzScabberz 2006-02-13 ch 8, | abuseHinnerz! I'm so glad you're back on track, that was really cool. Good job, mate! :D I'm absolutely lovin' it! Your writing in this chapter was especially great...I could literally see all of this happening in my head...even morethan usual! Which is, of course, the sign of a great writer! :D Keep it up! Luv ya! |
| Rheanna Leigh 2006-01-20 ch 7, | abuseAww..poor Matt. He's just trying to be nice to her.. |