 Kissing Concrete 2007-06-01 . chapter 1WOW- so powerful and really showed deep, raw emotion. great job and keep writing!! |
 Tikvah Ariel 2005-12-18 . chapter 1I really liked this, normally I'm not a poetry fan but I have a soft spot for letters.
The last lines were particularly strong, in my opinion the lines
"Once had love,
someone to have and to hold"
Were the weakest though |
 Evaa Moffat 2005-10-12 . chapter 1very beautiful. sad but beautiful. the theme reminds me (as well as the title) of my piece called dear anonymous. awesome rhythm and imagery.
~evaa p.s. i'm a harry potter fan too.(tell no more lies..) i forgot about that line though. i guess its sort of a cliché. |
 S0ulSearching 2005-10-12 . chapter 1I love it!! Especially the last couple of lines...*adds to favorites* Keep it up.--pammy-x3 |
 Jolith 2005-10-12 . chapter 1A very good piece, struck emotions I had wished long lost. Keep making more :) |
 Jen 2005-10-12 . chapter 1 Cute. |
 Zadzukki Dragonkith 2005-10-11 . chapter 1Huh... this one has a somewhat... different mien to it. Still, I like it. A piece you should be proud of.
-Zadzukki Dragonkith |