Very nice. And recently, that means a lot more then what it seems... *cough I'm not being mean and being blunt about people's poems *cough* ^^;; but yes, this is a truely very nice piece. Very poetic, yet more then the poetry, I loved the mesage it was saying. Very nice. You're always so happy-perky-ness that it's hard to forget that there is another side to you... Not meaning this in a bad way at all. Man.. I'm just confusing myself. Bottom line, Very nice poem.

Interesting...and so true...I loved the flow, it was awsome. Keep it up.--pammy-x3

YOu had a couple lapse' in rythm, other than that it was okay.