I like the story it tells...and it's really well written. Keep it up.--pammy-

I love this line the best: "Her teardrop falls, as did the wilted rose"Very nice; keep writing!

Aww... beautiful poem! It's really romantic... there's lots of emotion and imagery conveyed through your lovely descriptions :) It's also sad though, how the sweetness of the old days in the beginning of the poem turns to loathing and blame and helpless wilting at the end. Well done, and keep writing! (I love your pen name by the way :))

I love it!