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| Midnights Scream 2008-07-20 ch 9,  | abuseinteresting stuff. I don't know if I like it or not. It depresses me. |
| Midnights Scream 2008-07-19 ch 7, | abuseI think Lasa is setting himself up for heartbreak, but maybe that's what he needs to figure out a healthy balance in his life. |
| Dying in Black 2008-06-14 ch 19, | abuseIs there another story of Eria coming up? That little last part was very interesting ^^ more series please these are my absolute favorite! |
| Dying in Black 2008-06-14 ch 18, | abuseDamn why were they being so mean to Cyric? He's so funny! [hugs] |
| Dying in Black 2008-06-14 ch 17, | abuseI love Tori's mate so cute! Poor Lasa I feel for him wanting to see his baby I hope you start on a new story a fourth installation on the Garnet series about Lasa's son and Moria's. |
| Dying in Black 2008-06-14 ch 15, | abuseHahaha, "When are the babies coming" Lasa's cute, baby shower! ^^ |
| SOS 2008-03-26 ch 19, anon. | abuseWhile I really like this series and many of your other stories, such as Finding Heaven, I do have one problem with your writing. While your plotlines are sound you go overboard with the details and your chapters are too long. I would be better if you cut some unimportant scenes and then cut down the rest of the story into shorter chapters. |
| JtheChosen1 2008-03-14 ch 19, | abuseawesome work as always! |
| kiki 2008-03-13 ch 20, anon. | abuseno! the Garnet series are my favorite! Please don't discontinued them! |
| Anon 2008-03-13 ch 20, anon. | abuseI'm actually kind of relived. I like your other stories so much more. Please keep writing. |
| Eva McGregor 2008-02-02 ch 19, | abusei love that i am not the only one that has the idea that mpreg can be something other than a plot divice with no explination and be explained logicly as a species/gender. bravo |
| Hyuuga Neji 2007-11-07 ch 19, anon. | abuseI love this story. Actually I love all your stories. I didn't think i would like this one because I'm really not into the military type stuff, but I had to read this one till the end. The only thing I notice was that sometimes you used Garent and sometimes Garnet so I'm not sure which it really is. Anyway, I'd love to know what happens to Hogorth, slimy bastard that he is. It's a pity they had to remove Lasa's womb though. It would have been nice if he could have more children even if he wasn't supposed to have Calen. I like how Torii and his brother finally came to terms. My question is, how come Cyric is pregnant? What is the perfect human? |
| leylaxx16 2007-04-18 ch 19, | abuseThis was a very good story. I finished it like at the very beginning of 2007 but i am just now writing my review. I am also looking forward to a side story on Eria and Bromach, I think that it seems like it would be a very good story to read. |
| DiamondKing 2007-03-30 ch 19, | abuseCan I just say that, I LOVE THIS STORY!! I read it all in two days. I really can't say much else, except that I really enjoyed reading this story. ~DiamondKing |
| darrena 2007-02-21 ch 19, | abuseLovely, lovely story. I absolutely adore the Garnet series. :) It's brilliant. :) |