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Istappen 2009-10-19 . chapter 17
Well, it's a really good story. But I think the ending was a little too sudden and left a lot unsaid. Like Destin redecorates the whole house, he wanted a child but then he doesn't, and then he wants to travel but he doesn't really know why or what he's looking to find... I think the progress went to fast.
Anyway, I still love the story and hope you'll write more :)
LeahDude 2009-09-02 . chapter 17
I like the sudden but sweet ending. I'd have liked for the sex-end of the relationship to be sorted but it's good anyways. I really love it. I love Destin's character as much as always, and feel so sad for everything that he went through. I think that their relationship was amazing and very strong for them to be able to survive everything they've went through. They truly were amazing. I really, really loved the story. I think it's an amazing sequel to the first and it flowed well with it. Well done.
onegrl 2009-08-12 . chapter 17
This story twists and turns enough to make me dizzy. I've read a lot of your stories and I like this one especially. The only thing I would suggest is going back and editing old chapters for some of the things that slipped past spellcheck.
Tennislove 2009-07-08 . chapter 12
This story is really good. I had previously read finding heaven when I found this story. Although im not exactly happy with the way things are going; im sure that things will get better. I'm just wondering if this ever really happens, if people are ripped from there loved ones by the misunderstandings of the justice court. Any ways, keep up the good work.
cobraqueen17 2009-05-25 . chapter 17
What that can't be it. *looks around for more* um next segment
aesthetic.rainbows 2009-03-01 . chapter 17
Your not going to leave it here are you?
please continue.

i find that i love reading your stories. they're so compelling.
especially this series i cant tell you how many times i've read it.
you're wonderful.
kepp up the good work.
ILY.
Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 17
Another excellent story. Armand & Destin get more loveable. I really hate Destin's family; all of them, on his father's side that is. I don't know about his mother's side of the family. But seriously you have to write more, you can't leave it there, please write more, I'd really appreciate it.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-01-02 . chapter 17
This is an amazing sequel so far. I cant wait for the rest. I love how one moment destin is sweet and innocent and the next he is a wild sex kitten who gets revenge on people by freezing all their assets and destroying everything they love...

I love him so much... oh and armand too.lol


Please update soon!
RebeccaLi 2008-12-14 . chapter 17
this is not th end, right? I mean you can't end it like this.. I want more.
JadeCade 2008-10-26 . chapter 15
The desire to torture, maim, and kill is back with a vengence but I am no longer physically capable of reacting with harsh cutting words, violently imagined pain, and insistent babbling. I am no longer sure of what I am saying. I imagine this is something similar to what Destin might be feeling. Numb. Devoid of the ability to process your own thoughts... It is now 7 am... I awoke yesterday at 9 am... that means I have been awake for approx. 22 hours. Excuse my math if its wrong. I'm going to bed and hopefully things will be better when I wake up... Love you. Love you all, expect Amos and his team. Wish they'd burn in hell and wish I could be the one responsible for putting them there... Apparently I miscalculated and the babbling is still working. Now, I'm off to bed and nothing short of chapter 16 will stop me. Is it strange I feel the urge to cuddle Val right now? Cuddle... not strangle?
JadeCade 2008-10-26 . chapter 14
-sobs openly in relief- Byron! Allan! New judge! I am eternally grateful to you! Destin is back where he belongs and I can start to feel normal again. I must say though... two months? I am glad it only took me four or five hours because I honestly don't think I could have lasted two days. That was torture at its finest. I take back what I said the other day about you being number 2 on my favorite authors list of all time... you have been promoted to #1! Stephenie Meyer can take a back seat to your brillance. Though I must say she did a fair job at torturing me with New Moon. Can you read the progression of my mental state? I am slowly regaining rational thought... My God. TWO long torturous miserable lonely scary tense frustating months... Darkladyknight--you are AMAZING!
JadeCade 2008-10-26 . chapter 13
-sighs heavily- I have survived another chapter and you'll be pleased to know I have not killed anyone yet... physically. I can't seem to find Amos Page in the phonebook. I feel better now. Kinda. I was a bit upset with the whole divorce thing but I definetly could see the legal advantages plus... it'll just mean another wedding with no greedy uncles casting their overbearing shadows! A reinstatment of vows! Sappiness and fluff! ...and more healing... Armand is correct in realizing he has to fight for Destin nearly everytime he turns around. The boy's proving hard to fight for this time... but so worth the struggle! Anyway, just wanted to give an update in case you worried over what you did to my mental state... Lol! Kidding. I love this story just as much as the other one. You should be proud. There was only ever one other story I read that caused me such an emotional, insane outburst. I love stories that get such a rise out of me. It's hard to read through the first time but I already know things will turn out all good. I trust you. Still want to harm and maim and torture but the temptation is somewhat dimmed. I wasn't kidding what I said about Amos making Val seem a saint. In fact, I have forgiven Val though I hadn't quite made it there at the end of Finding Heaven. I have now made my peace with him and wish him the best of luck with finding his place. And if he ever needs a place to crash he is more than welcome at my house where I will mother him and baby him adoringly. (Until I remember what he did to my baby Destin. Then the boy's getting his ** whooped. Then I'll revert back to the caring, doting hostess...)
JadeCade 2008-10-26 . chapter 12
FUN?!?!?! You call this fun?? I am going to pieces over here! I must keep trucking and read through to the end of this nightmare if I want to sleep tonig... this morning... I'm tired, I'm shivering so bad and its not because of the cold, I have dozens of death threats for those damn uncles (not so much threats as plans), I think I'm a few minutes away from either a breakdown or a panic attack of my own, I'm going insane over here I want Destin home NOW! Let's hire an assassin to take out that ** judge. Is that even legal to not hear the other side of a case? It damn well better be because that was a bunch of ** lies! My God I don't remember the last time I cursed this much in a review and I'm restraining myself. I usually avoid cursing at all but gah! That institution is SO getting bulldozed as soon as Destin's out of there. Even if we over protective yaoi fangirls have to tear it down brick by ** brick! Okay, deep breath... Calm down.. lets visit our happy place. The torture chamber filled with every possible torture equipment. Yes, gonna put the pregnant ** and the ** uncle through their paces. -Patient failing to respond to treatment- Let's get two or three different lawyer firms working on this! If Tad wants to redeem himself in my eyes... let's see Blackbar help. See, there's more of us than there are of them. We have 3 companies, the best laywers possible, we have Allan, Lincoln, Vi, Jason! Oh Jason! Save us please! We have Billy and Trey, and Maggie and Gates, and Michael and Don, we got Adam, Angie, Michael's wife, baby Cara(no child left behind!), Corey, Dale, Pete, Bev, Charles, Bryon? Please? The President of the United States? Let me plea my case to him! I want the Senate, Congress, military, army, navy, national guard, coast guard, milita, and terrorists on this too! Edward you miserable piece of scum you better be playing our double agent or you can join your wife and uncle in the torture chamber! This stress relief is not working. Jesus girl, you just made Val look like a saint. It's five in the morning and you drove me to the chocolate ice cream stage. I enjoy chocolate ice cream but I'm freezing and sweating and my stomach feels like it wants to revolt against me... It's a bad thing when I want my comfort food when I know my tummy can't handle it... I am going to go steep in my sins(sloth, wrath, gluttony) Meaning I am going to splurge on ice cream, abuse my head with an empty soda can, and shiver and cry myself to sleep. Or I can ignore the fact that I too need sleep and keep reading... Considering your preview of next chapter... ignore my needs it is! God help me...
i-see-faeries 2008-09-23 . chapter 17
This is like an extended rollar coaster ride. It's emotional twists after twists. There's something seriously wrong with Destin, and Armand's a saint for putting up with everything. Update soon! Much love.
Iuno 2008-09-20 . chapter 1
Oh this is lovely I didn't know you made a sequel after I reviewed Finding Heaven. All the more that it's already finished since I'm often too impatient waiting for updates. I would suggest a beta for both stories though, it would make the read more enjoyable. Overall, I'm still in love with Destin and Armand's relationship. Keep it up.
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