your ideas are really good and your message is clear- i just hope that you dont turn into one of those poetry or die type of people- you know- the ones who take everything so seriously, and then try toi be so unique that they change who they are to become something they are not. The peom went well with my day- so good job, and keep the ideas flowing!

Very morbid, and the parts in parenthesis definitly add a bit of sarcasm to it, which is definitly what you're best at. You never cease to amaze

Powerful; you have such a contrasting quality in your work (that I've noticed at least) have have very hard edges but the tone of your narritive is very innocent. Like you know the ways of the world but when you write the bullshit doesn't control you; more like it sents you free. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.