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Not Dead Fred 2007-04-03 ch 11,	tis good. Tootles! ~The Muses~
For What Its Worth 2006-04-10 ch 11,	spoky. but awesome! are the twins going to team up with Amara? that'd be totally cool. And what IS Coriander if not a Child of Death?
573f4n 2006-02-26 ch 11,	Heh. Yes I'm back. bows down elegantly Though I am sorry to say that I have not fallen off the face of the Earth because that isn't possible. XP What can I say? The world loves me too much to let me go. cough LoL. Yay! Yay! It ain't cliche! (That rhymes! Coolio...) Erm... hm. Life: bitchy and downright blunt. Death: the complete opposite. I just love you and your ideas, dude! About Sheehan, I could make use of him as me side-kick or PIC at school if Corri hands him to me--if Amara doesn't kill him, that is. And wahoo! You just told me that Corri isn't a Child of Death when it's written below. I give you a cookie. And, NO SPOILERS PLEASE! Just Hints. I love hints. XP No, wait. Spoilers are okay... rarr. >o< Hehehe. Grammar and Spelling: I haven't noticed anything wrong, though I might blame it on the spell you've held over me. And yes, you are right! You do have short chapters... and I dunno. What's the main point in this chappy? I didn't really get it except for: 1. Zesira can shift forms 2. There are other forces (the Seven) that can be some sort of group of Death's Children that run a lower society of vampires. 3. Coriander really isn't a Child of Death tho he's risen as one. 4. Zeph wasn't here! Wah. Write again soon! Your trying-to-be-responsible-enough-to-review-reviewer,Syrith
Casey Drake 2006-02-25 ch 11,	oo... COOL! :) CD
573f4n 2006-02-25 ch 10,	Hi there, I'm back! And I'm so, so, so sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while--I mean, this story. At first, it seemed kind of cliche to me--the whole vampire thing--'cause you see these kinds of stories all over ficpress. But. It's YOU. So when I got the time to read fics again, the first one I checked is this. Feel happy, 'kay? I love you! I loved the concept of Death being the father of "vampires" and the whole God/Goddess thing as the supreme rulers (once again). Plus, the incest-thing adds a twist. I'm already thinking of character pairings, darn you. XP Oh... so early in the story... Heh. I absolutely love Amara and her elegant yet deadly "feel". And of course, Sheehan and Zephyr. Can Zeph be mine? Please? He's so... cute and, I dunno, cuddly? I love cats! And so we go to the topic of Coriander, the enigma in a way. What is he?! Yes, he is unlucky to have died in such a way, but what made him so--so? I quote un-exactly, "He may even become as powerful as Amara." Yep. There we have it. I'm pretty sure that it wasn't Death who sired his mother, yes? And Amara couldn't possibly sleep with another, right? So, is it some sort of power-leak from Amara? Maybe, maybe not. Anyway, love yah! And I WILL review if I have the time. Ch 23 in MoM is really amusing, especially the Iolani-scene. :D And uhm... I dunno. I seem to like CoD more than MoM. Well, that's my opinion... :D
Raniphae 2006-02-25 ch 10,	Oh! This was a good one! I particularly like the complexity in your two new characters (granted, based on the way you ended it, I can't be certain how long they'll last; personally, I think it would be a waste to kill them off so quickly). I'm always a fan of personalities that are, in a way, honorable, but warped by painful experience.
Casey Drake 2006-02-22 ch 10,	hmm... this is gonna be interesting. :D CD
Casey Drake 2006-01-11 ch 9,	oo... this is cool. I ususally don't go for vampire, but this is REALLY interesting. :) CD
IceEnchantress 2005-11-21 ch 8,	As simply as I can put this... awesome. I started reading, reviewed once before, and I just couldn't stop reading. Keep up the wonderful work.
Raniphae 2005-11-03 ch 8,	Yay - I got a mention! (And I wasn't mad! That's just my way of saying it was extra-good. ^.~) Yes, Life is most definitely awesome - not how I would have imagined her (more green), but I think your version makes just as much sense, if not more. I think you mean strobe lights, though, not strode lights (sorry, being picky). Finally, you know the drill: please update!
Erbear-Ink 2005-10-27 ch 1,	OMG what an awesome story! Death is so cool. I can't wait to read more! Please keep up the awesome work!
Raniphae 2005-10-19 ch 5,	This is my second review of this, and my opinion still stands: very, very good. Although all the chapters could use a once-over for typos. But anyway... please update quickly - you can't leave me dangling here!
blackmoondagger 2005-10-14 ch 4,	How mean! Why did Namir have to die? Oh well. At least Zephyr won't die. If you kill him I'm going to cry!
Raniphae 2005-10-13 ch 1,	Already I'm intensely intrigued...Very, very good.
blackmoondagger 2005-10-12 ch 3,	Yet another wonderful chapter!

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