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| Matt 2008-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuserain is just plain cute. it flowed really well. reminds me of a nursery rhyme in some respects. definitely a good thing in my book. i can just picture a child saying it while jumping rope or balancing on something. the religious aspect makes sense too. after all, they say children are a window to god |
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 2006-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseO, I liked this little piece ^_^. I can't say what I like about, but I just do. Glad you liked my piece and thanks for the review. |
| Cazrolime 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseThat's sweet. :) Really nice poem. |
| A Phantom Stranger 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseI love its simplicity and just pure joy in the poem as opposed to all the dark morbid writins on this site...its beauty is in that its through the simple things that you feel the closest to you faith! a joy to read |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is very nice, I enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |