rain is just plain cute. it flowed really well. reminds me of a nursery rhyme in some respects. definitely a good thing in my book. i can just picture a child saying it while jumping rope or balancing on something. the religious aspect makes sense too. after all, they say children are a window to god

O, I liked this little piece _. I can't say what I like about, but I just do. Glad you liked my piece and thanks for the review.

That's sweet. :) Really nice poem.

I love its simplicity and just pure joy in the poem as opposed to all the dark morbid writins on this site...its beauty is in that its through the simple things that you feel the closest to you faith! a joy to read

This is very nice, I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.