Eh...Okay, what in the world is this story? Its so...weird, strange and...

F**KING BRILLIANT!

Where in the world did you get such inspiration for this? It is amazing!Your descriptive ability is like silk on my skin, beautiful and expensive. And the plot is so...abnormal, yet obsessivaly controlling. I applauded you. This is one of the BEST pieces of literature I have ever read on this website, or any website for that matter. Wonderful job!

wow what a mean mom. i wouldn't want to be her child. very good by the way please continue soon.

Geez, this is rather twisted and original! I like it. At first, I was certain that it'd be a cliché band story, but wow, did you prove me wrong! I'm thoroughly intrigued by this story. It's delightfully creepy and captivating. I'm very curious to see how Robert develops, how his future behavior will be affected by his childhood. I can't wait for your next chapter!

I HATE YOU! NO FUCKER I LOVE YOU EK

This chapter was so mean! I don't get the relation between the characters. Alexis and Lucas are weird and Robert's mom is just plain EVIL BITCH DIE

Robert is albino right? I hope you're aware that albino's really have pale or brown eyes and not pink o.O

LOVE! MORE I'm gonna nag about this on MSN. I was just reminded about what I truly love with your writing you bitch.

Ittookmesometime toread this, because I am developing a headache and I had to go cleaning up the mess I made with the tea I was making,but here I am.

I think you are working on original stories just as good as you do with fictions on the FF.net.

I mean, this is a piece of art.

Not only the story is greatly described, but you put itina light that is just as if it's comingreal before my eyes (just as scary as the charas coming alive from the screen... I must be hallucinating due to headache)

So, as for this is my first non fictional reading, I loved it, absolutely.

I am now going to sleep, ortomorrow moringI'll wake upwith headache ten times worse.

Butyou shouldkeep up the work onoriginal as well, because you are not just talented with things other people invented, you as also good into creating things yourself, and this is something not many people can do.

MF

I absolutely adore the first part about the lipstick, it's awesome. (Robin's mom is one weird woman...) Some paragraphs or sentences need clarification though, they're a little hard to understand. But your language and descriptions are very...painting o.O If you get what I mean XD You've forgotten the word hair (I assume) in this part: "Some days her would be frizzy and uncontrollable"In this part: "Her nails were the same colour as the remaining skin; her skin the same colour as the flesh." You haven't specified before which color the skin of the apple is, so I got confused if it's red, green or yellow o.O Write the next chapter! *spanks*

oh oh some advertisement for my sucky fics too XD i love reviews XD

*takes a bow*

Chibi, you know how much I love your work and I already told you that this piece of wonderfull poetry is...excellent. You have a talent for writing things that contains obsession in one form or another..definitely. Though you have a talent when it comes to writing most things*^^* I simply love the part where Lucas is with his sister and he "kills" all those "defenceless" apples..as you put it*XD* I`m definitely waiting for more on this one Chibi!

*hugs from the Tay*

(Heavy panting) H-hello... (Drops to floor) That took a while to read...but it was good! I saw the title, then saw yaoi, then incest...then I was hooked. Good job! You're writing is just...detailed! Wonderful job! But it's only the end of the first chapter right? I hope to see more...addicted to it like...well, yaoi is my anti-drug so...just keep writin'!

Harlequin~Please fix me...