nice...dark but questionin...-gone-

I love the flow of this poem, the way that the words came together is wonderful. The 'oddness' behind the poem is one that I have not heard before.

Keep it up.

i liked the last lines also and agree with Morbid Mind. i've read so many vampire books it's not even funny. i liked this poem.

in memory,shadow

THIS IS GOOD. THIS IS GREAT. I MEAN IT. I LOVED THE LAST LINE. You had a vampiric addiction with another person? Lmao.

you have some awesome closing is another excellent . thanx for reviewing my stuff :D

umm drinking other persons blood interesting i hope you drank it befor it clotted ick! how nasty(clotted blood not the drinking of blood) why did you drink it love lust to feel something so new something no one else could feel with your friend something both of you would share forever?

anyway this is goin on fav list if there is room keep it up writen

The poem is...Interesting. The premise behind it is...EW! Don't think I would go there, but hey, to each his own. K