hoy hoy. me likes. and i'm sure some others in poseidon will like as well. however, there are too many conservative-like pussies in there, so unfortunately i don't think you should submit this one.

but damn christian, you can write XD

hasta luego

i really like this, the stanzas that dont have "Sacred Young Sir" in the first line stand out and have much more impact, which is clever. well done.

Han.

you sure do write alot of poems xD thats okay. I thought this was very well written and you should keep on doing it! ;D uh... I'm never really good at leaving reviews.. heh.. ah well basically, you have a good way of expressing your feelings. ...that sounded so corny. lol

I like this. Well written and I don't know what else to say but it could make a good song. Oh and by the way I like the quote used in the summary but Stalin actually said it. Manson just quoted him in the fight song. Mhm keep writing :D