It's the truth reality does sux but it's just how you live it is how you will get through it

I don't know...the last line seems odd...

I was relating the "love, life and sorrow" (there should be a comma after the second in the sequence there) and the "horrow, fear and hate" cus they're both groups of three, and horror rhymes with sorrow, and love and hate are opposites, and life and fear kinda work with that...

I'm not sure if the metaphor works...if reality is a thin veil that words can flow pass...where does one exsist? So reality is only a thin barriar between beings? ...eh, kinda works...

I like the imagery

Wow this is deep, as I usually say Its free to dream BUT reality PAYS...great job KW, and thanks for the reviews

good wording, good idea, and good ending.

reality...or not. i can't choose, but i love the theme of your poem.

i really like this and there is great truth behind it!