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| Abdul Alhazred - John Brewe... 2007-09-04 ch 1,  | abuseA great example for allowing your reader to take in more information than a wordy poem could achieve. The ambiguity of a few powerful words makes it personal. No matter who you are. I like this sort of poetry. |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseVery cool and strong language. I like this type of writing, very powerful! |
| simpleplan13 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abuseinteresting & very cool |
| The Un-great-ful 2005-10-20 ch 1, | abuseOn second thoughts i like this. I can see what i didn't see whilst i was unable to bend my concentration fully to it last time. Cane the populace with the parody, as the saying goes, 'They'll never know what hit them' |
| Rozlin 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abuseoh wow! that was really good and i love the last line! |
| Aslan Israel 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abusePerfect opening. Very real. |