i think it's very sweet you've tried to attempt something outside your boundary...you're related to Reyavie? i never knew! well, the peom still is pretty, but just needs a little bit more touches to it!

Hey, Brie! This was really good, I loved the ending! It was really good, I wish i could do that -sighs- oh well I'll stick to stories lol okies well off to read the others

Heya sis *smiles* I really like this one. The short words you used bring it strength and everything is said in them. A pity our dreams keep being damaged with time. Loved it.

Going to read the others *grins*, Reyavie

I do. The structure is unique. I never can write like that.

Anyway. the part I like the most is at the bottom. "...Let.../...the innocent.../...dream..."

Nice.

-Misery Re-