This is beautiful, excellent work!

I do love your writing, I think it's so interesting. The chorus was my favorite part, especially the first line: Mystery lies at the core of the earth.

I love your songs, I really hope you get somewhere with them someday!

Much love,

Lady Glass

er.. I think It's just a bit corny, but it really sticks in my head. All it needs is a tune to go w/ it.