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| T41N7 2005-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseI know just how you feel. I am always trying to hear what God has to say to me, but His words are lost in my own thoughts. I hear Him say what I want him to say, not what He is really trying to tell me. I also avoid talking to him because of shame, I don't want to confess my sins to Him or myself. Because of that, when I ask His help, I never can clearly understand His answers. I hope you are better off than me. I loved this poem, keep it up! |
| Kavita Najim 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseSad and desparing. Questions to God are always the most painful to ask and hardest to get a reply... Peace, Jessi |
| Sparkle Freak 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseI like the ending, "On and on, the dice roll, but LORD I am giving You all control" I would say it gives two views, one of living without control, and living with control. Good words. Keep writing |