When will I see some pervertedness? And what's with all these stories and their darn hangcliffers but no updates? *pouts* I wanna second chapter gosh darn it!

LOL XD Um...well, first some complaining: I want to know how they look like! Not enough descriptions on their looks, but you have a good flow on describing environtment, though you forget to include those little descripitive words when it comes to the characters themselves. Also in the sentence "and more then decent meals" it's THAN (then means afterwards), I've noticed MANY people make this mistake and it annoys the hell out of me. You're good at catching my attention at least ^_~ so write the next chap *whips*

He'll ask him if they could get married!

write more goddamnit!! I want to read more! I'm curious about what's going on! How did everything happen?!, you know I hate being confused... monkey

Your authors note cracked me up.:)

I like it.Go on please.

really cool story

like the way you know nothing yet!