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Reviews For: Fog
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-12-16 . chapter 1
Wow, every bit is strong and eloquent, and the end is the real clincher. Very lovely.
bjw 2005-10-13 . chapter 1
Whoa!! This is really really good! It gives a whole new mystical feel to fog - I'd never thought of fog as enchanting before! Love these lines, "with the coming of fog/that clouds reason/and opens eyes." I especially enjoyed that play on "clouds"... Your descriptions are so sweetly enticing. It's very lovely writing!:)
Laura Keil 2005-10-13 . chapter 1
A thorough reflection on fog, what can I say. I especially like the last stanza.
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