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| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseWow, every bit is strong and eloquent, and the end is the real clincher. Very lovely. |
| BlueJayWalking 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuseWhoa!! This is really really good! It gives a whole new mystical feel to fog - I'd never thought of fog as enchanting before! Love these lines, "with the coming of fog/that clouds reason/and opens eyes." I especially enjoyed that play on "clouds"... Your descriptions are so sweetly enticing. It's very lovely writing!:) |
| Laura Keil 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuseA thorough reflection on fog, what can I say. I especially like the last stanza. |