Great Job here. Keeping the lines the same syllables will help poetry go more smoothly.

Oh, and Assassin PoC, it's a sequil, so you might want to check out the first one.

great use of bold, spacing, underlining, etc. it's very ambiguous (not sure if you were going for that) on whether narrator remains in love, or is out of it but not over it. angsty. i like it :) -m.d.-

Holy crap, that was a really powerful poem. The emotions that you were feeling just leaps out at you and I could feel what it was you were writing about. The turmoil that you feel about the situation makes for wonderful poetry.