i love the feeling in this. it's very powerful. very nice work ^^

hey i randmly decided to check these out that was such a sweet poem

Sorrowful. Everyone should read this and finally be acknowledged of this. Wonderful poem, so very right. Keep it up!

O_O...that was really good...sad too... -wips tears from eyes- ain't this just the truth...always hiding...well,. great poem, like always sis! Keep putting more up! me!

Well, you know how I feel about your writing. I think this is really good. It's so true.And not even just for little kids, but people my age too. I really liked this! -grins and hands over poptart- ya gotta try it! -dances- okies toodles! -waves-