 Starbuck Scully 2005-11-10 . chapter 1WO alien/x files poem! its do good, and soo true :D and so good :D |
 Nemonus 2005-10-14 . chapter 1Good rhymes, good rhythm except in a couple times, like "on one of the planets"...it just doesn't match. But very good subject, idea etc...quite a few people feel like you do. |
 keron 2005-10-13 . chapter 1 hmm... very thought-provoking piece!~ It had a great meter and rhyme throughout, except in the third stanza where you faltered a little in "on one of the planets"... it just loses its cadence. but on the whole, the entire piece is engaging and moving, a quiet, determined call for the mystery of life to remain sacrosanct. Way to go! |
 Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-10-13 . chapter 1I agree with you in this...i cant accept the fact that there is nothing out there...i mean, Hello? The universe is infinate and if there was no life on any of the quadrillion planets out there then we really are alone, but i dont belive that...there HAS to be something out there..well done^_^ |
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