very nice. It fits the character of Avalon well. keep on writin' many thanks your average psycho

Stupid and pointless, this should be in poetry. If you're going to make a novel out of this, at least put this as a lead, not an entire 'chatper' by itself

Very good...and deep. I like it lots...and now you've given me a point for the total revision of SO...yeah...thanks!Sayonara

~~Silv~~

TT So angsty Mei Mei! I love it! ^^ ::Great big HUGGLE:: OH...I emailed you...reply back peez ::Another great big huggle::