Excellent story!

Wow. That was wonderful. One of the best pieces of work that I have read in a long time and probably *the* best Greek Mythology fic I've ever read period. Beautiful job.


-Unknown Goddess

Go Mythology!

This was an amazing story! You have such a great writing style, and you combine your own original ideas with the mythological stories everyone knows into a beautiful masterpiece. Awesome job!

a nice one

gr8 one

what a lovely story!
I just discovered this, and I must say, wow!
your characters are startlingly real to be in such a supernatural setting, and the way in which they interacted with one another was absolutely fabulous.
Apollo was definitely interesting, and always captivated my attention when he made an appearance. The same went for Aphrodite and Eros, then Artemis at the end. The way you portrayed the gods in your work was unique, I think, as they were nearly human at some points and then obviously divine at another. It was fascinating.
Your steady incorporation of Latin words was also very intriguing. I personally have only just begun studying the language and loved it when you introduced new words. Marvelous, really.
To top it all off, it was also very historically correct, or at least as far as I feel a work of this nature needs to be, since it isn't as much historical as it is mythological. It was a stunning work, and that's all that matters.
Great job on a fantastic piece!

Wow! An excellent chapter, and a great way to end the story. I've really enjoyed reading this, and look forward to your future writings!

~Catherine Carter

What you have is excellent. The writing is truly superb - you've got some great phrases in there.

The only thing I'd say is that it seems rushed. Slow down a bit, take your time, explain a bit more. Specifically Aphrodite's story and when all the different gods come near the end.

Interesting chapter. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see what happens next.

W00t! The part with Phasyleia was exelently done However, you seemed extremely rushed towards the end of the chapter. I'd slow down a bit, especially the last 6 paragraphs or so.

Good chapter!! I can hardly wait for the next one!!

WHAT? There is no way you can leave it at that! I love this story, and even if Marcus has been a bad boy without that obsession spell, I still think that Cassie and him should be together. But oh my goodness, Cassie is a half-goddess! I love this story, seriously, you need to keep at it! It's awesome!

This is one great story you've got there. But please post the following chapters soon. I just can't wait to read how it continues.

woww..interesting

Wow. I feel sorry for Cassandra. Good chapter!!