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| BreathingFlames 2006-07-16 ch 3, | abuseAw...this hasn't updated in a while, but I love it. Just so you know. Meaning you should post more in the near future... *puppy-dog eyes* Please? |
| Color Me.Sunset 2005-12-14 ch 3, | abuseCute...I so love your cute things cuz they're the perfect cute (wait, is that a compliment?). I've had this happen to me before, being locked in someones eyes. The bad part was that it was my bestfriend's cousin, the good part, he said he loved me. Angst insued. Bad news again, I havn't seen him for a year and, thanks to the angst, don't wanna. But thats my fault, as for Liam, he's gonna get his love on and live happily ever after...or something. :) |
| I've-seen-the-fairies 2005-11-10 ch 3, | abuseThat as a nice chapter. Rhydia reminds me something of myself *randomly stares out window*. I was going to say something... what the hell was it... oh! You always talk about how bad VS is, so I went and read it, (probably forgot to review it though, knowing me) and I like it! Actually, I like it alot. I think that was it... yes I think it was. Update stuff soon. |
| Esquirella 2005-11-10 ch 3, | abuseA fanboy? Of my stories? COOL! I love fans! LOL! I like this group of friends you've put Liam in. They're funny and sarcastic. Goth boy reminds me a little of Kee. I like sarcasm. LOL! Keep going! |
| Graphiti Skies 2005-11-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseAw. Just aww. ^.^ Mrs. Lenore rocks. I wish I had teachers like that. *huggles* keep up the good work love. |
| Becks-007 2005-11-08 ch 3, | abuseOoh, Liam and Erik sitting in a tree, K-I--too soon? ^.~ Great chapter! Liam was so cute! |
| AppLEaves 2005-11-08 ch 3, | abuseThe beach isn't fun. It's full of fat old foriegners who laze all day, sunburnt and sagging. I wouldn't know about the truck thing. Parents are too overprotective here. My school walls are HARD. I walked into them once. And didn't want to do that again. I saw my name in your reply to GS. And come to think of it... IT WAS CUTE! No way am I gonna forget about that, uh-uh. I like Goth boy though... give him a name. Preferably a cute one. Aack... gotta go. -Sugar P.S. Where's Rett's part? |
| Dr. Pepper 14 2005-11-07 ch 3, | abuseHaha, I totally love it! Liam kind of reminds me of myself, the way he thinks the whole world is out to rape him. Hehe. Whenever anyone asks me to do something I don't wanna do, my excuse is always "No! They'll rape me!" (even if it's just my mom telling me to clean my room or something... she doesn't like it when is say that, but **-whatever). I can't believe he didn't know what a freakin' poptart was! Oh my god, I almost choked on my own spit. I fear for his life if he can't even open a door... he figured it out though, so there's still hope! I'm already madly and deeply in love with Erik! Okay, not really. I don't know why I said that (too much Dr. Pepper- makes me all hyper and ** ), but I can't wait to see more of him in later chapters and THEN fall madly and deeply in love with him! I already think he's sexy, so that's a start! Adorable, absolutely adorable. With adoration, -Dr.P |
| TiGeR-BaBe1989 2005-11-07 ch 3, | abuse^.^ OH! This chapter was even better! Now I can't wait to see how this whole story just goes. The first three chapter, yeah they were freakin awesome, but I'm just OH SO EXCITED to read more. WoOtErS. Welps I can't wait for more, and all that happy horse **. lol. Later. |
| Juanitothegreat 2005-11-07 ch 3, | abuseI'm deffinately not the first reviewer this time, but I have not been checking my e-mail lately and have not been on FictionPress since...well...since you updated this story last. Anywhoo, I liked it. Finally, the slashy part of the story. I like this chapter the best so far, although some old ladies would be a great addition to this chapter (though, I guess Mrs. Lenore makes up for the lack of the other two). Oh, one question, although it was probably mentioned in earlier chapters and I am just too lazy to go look it up, does Liam know he is gay or is this a new development for him since moving? This review would be much longer, but I am writing it at school and the bell is about to ring. Keep writing. |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-11-06 ch 3, | abuseWow..that last part was just...amazingly funny. I can totally see it happening too. I also like the part with "What am I, a llama?" because I use that phrase sometimes (when necessary :P), except I'm a goat **does a goat sound** |
| xanthofile 2005-11-06 ch 3, | abuseaw, lovi-ness! i like the two rules, they're good and solid. everyone should have rules like that! and i loved that he stuttered. too cute! ann-y-way...it's good that you may find more time to write. lord knows i know how a busy schedule interfers with such matters. as i type, rasta guy has not even been looked at for over 4 days, at least. (but i will eventually, b/c i'm revamping Forced Mating right now. that's almost done) and i loved the llama line! whee. |
| I've-seen-the-fairies 2005-10-27 ch 2, | abuseDid I not review last chapter? Hmm, I must have spaced out. I do that rather alot. Anyways, I like it so far and I think it will be cute. Did you know that I'm on chapter 12 of LDiLT? You haven't been reviewing! *cries* that makes me sad. Please go read all my updates when you get time, and update soon (YSoMN to!!) |
| Esquirella 2005-10-24 ch 2, | abuseVery interesting story you have here. I look forward to more. |
| AppLEaves 2005-10-23 ch 2, | abuseAww crap. Damn. Just because my family decides to drag me to the beach for a few days, I didn't get to read OR review this (amazing, wonderful, marvelous, addicting, and pretty weird) story. Umm... "Don't forget to wash behind your ears, 'cause if you don't, you'll get hit by a truck!"? Are they supposed to have some kinda connection? Breakable walls!? I have never seen one before in my life. Then how the hell is the school still standing up? Oh great. Gotta go eat. -Sugar |