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| citrus scented 2005-10-31 ch 1, | wow. the emotion in this is almost epic- its so moving and perfectly, perfectly laid out. i love the repeating: "this is where I am"- i just adore that, it works so well. and you manage to convey a story through so little words. like you want to be with this person but except that you can't- and thats shown also through the last line. wonderfully written. |
| Homeslice 2005-10-17 ch 1, | Hm... I feel like this should make me think of Ron but for some reason I picture Marc. Odd. Me likey at any rate. ^^ |
| ninjavsself 2005-10-16 ch 1, | Your writing for me evokes a weird emotion that I dont' think I have ever felt in my life. That's why I kind of have trouble with your pieces, they come out of left field and kind of surprise me. And it makes sense to me as well. It was just a stupid history project. |
| Rose of Fire 2005-10-13 ch 1, | wow that is just awesome really powerful line it is something that i would just love to say to someone and walk away and not turn back to see their jaw drop. AWESOME |